In the first place,music is an essential part of how most of us enjoy our leisure is so engrossing that we forget about our trials and worries of everyday has the power to elicit deeply personal and specific patterns of thought and emotion in ,we need it to celebrate special music,it would not be the same celebrating at sporting events or embracing landmark moments such as wedding or also has the potential to help us perform to music activates and engages different areas of the brain,and has been shown to enhance memory and other cognitive functions.
Absolutely not if you want band 9. You must use natural language, not phrases and sentences you have learned from an academic writing website or book. Never learn sentences to put in your essay. Each essay is written uniquely depending on the topic. Any learned sentences are not counted by IELTS. I strongly suggest you get at least one of my advanced lessons in writing task 2 so you understand not only the techniques but what IELTS is all about in terms of how it functions as a language test: http:///IELTSLizStore